Japanese in 20 weeks

[sarcis]

I just got started with my website about learning Japanese as a beginner. I hope I can get feedback so I can improve the quality of the website.
Ideas of what to add is also highly appreciated!

japanesein20weeks.com

Thanks!
Peter

[ajmd20]

I only took a quick look but here are a couple of points.

Beer is ビール, the word ビル means building.
The particle wa is written with　は, not with わ.

It looks like it's shaping up to be quite a nice introductory site though, I've certainly seen much worse.

[ddrrll89]

ごちそおさま Thank you for the meal (after eating)
Change to ごちそうさま(御馳走様)
As ajmd20 said, change the わto は.
I guess you'll be busy for the next few weeks or so updating. Not to be mean or anything but at the moment, it doesn't have any more info than an introduction so I can't really comment...

[Dutch Baka]

I like your website a lot, nice design and easy to navigate true the context. Nice coding as well! Keep up the good work, and I hope you will receive some nice comments from others!

Don't forget to add jref.com to your link section ;)

[sarcis]

Thank you so much for the comments, I've changed it now. My intention is to create an accurate website, so I'll do better on that in the future.

[Mike Cash]

I must say that yours is a very novel approach and even if that were all it had going for it it would be worthy of admiration.

There have been lots of eager beginners afire to create sites teaching Japanese, when they barely have a handle on any portion of it themselves, and despite the existence of plenty of other online resources, some of which are reputed to be quite useful, accurate, and extensive.

But instead of that typical "I'll lead you and show you the way" attitude inherent in most sites, you take a very refreshing "walk along with me if you like" approach.

[Tea House]

きんょうび＝きんようび
きゅうがつ＝くがつ

Just some corrections to the readings

[Juno333]

Cool website, it's easy to handle and it looks great! Keep up the good work!

[jayrecords]

Thanks...
Cool website .. It looks like i will have some busy 20 weeks eheh