Some corrections and just plain help.

[cacawate]

Yello all,

Well, I got a few phrases here from a video game I've been playing/translating, and I was wondering if the more experienced (read: genius) Japanese speakers could help me out with some corrections. Here's what I got so far:


ここから　さきへ　すすませるわけには　いかないっ！
From here on, you cannot progress! (Said from a crazy robot-boss dude)
note: In english what would we say in this situation (as in all of these too, please)? Something along the lines of: "You'll never get passed me!"?

ここて゛　しんて゛もらおう。
You will die here.

しんて゛いった　なかまたち　の　かたき！
(?) (The enemy! (of our dead buddies))

イサ゛イサ゛イサ゛！！　ト゛リャーッ！
(?) (I have no idea, lol)

ハッハッハッ！　いいサ゛マた゛な　いま　らくに　し てやる
Hahaha! Nice ____ eh? Now, I'm gonna relax. (What's a zama?)

オーホホホホッ　この　わたしに　かてると　おもってるの ？
Gahahaha. You think you can beat me?

ここて゛　しんて゛おしまいっ！！
Now you're history!!

フッ　おろかな　わさ゛わさ゛しぬために　やってくる とは。
(?)

よく　ここまて゛きたな。　ます゛は　こてしらべ　と 　いこ
You've finally come. First, Let's warm up.

うか！
Huh?! (?)

いよいよ　ケリを　つける　ときか゛きたようた゛な。
It's seems the time to turn Keri on has finally come.

よくそ゛きた！　おろかなるものよ！
You came! How foolish!

めさ゛めしわれの　はし゛めての　いけにえとなれ！！
(?)

ワーハハハハッ！　おまえの　ちからは　そんなものか！！
Ahahaha! That's your so-called power?!

トローリと　あまいな！　こんと゛は　こっちのは゛んた゛！
(?)! One day it will be my turn!

ク゛ォォー！　あと　すこして゛　かんせ゛んに　ふっかつ
Uwooaaa! Soon you will be completely ressurected.

て゛きたものを．．．。
My creation...

Sorry for the post being so long -which is why I had to grease the wheels a bit earlier :D- but these are the ones I'm having trouble with. If anyone could help I'd be much obliged!

-Jeff

[fixelbrumpf]

フッ　おろかな　わさ゛わさ゛しぬために　やってくる とは。
(?)
I poked around in my dictionary a bit, and it seems to translate as something along the lines of:

"Ha! How foolish, you came here on purpose just to die!"

愚か 【おろか】 (adj-na,n) foolish, stupid, (P)
態々 【わざわざ】 (adv) (uk) expressly, specially, doing something especially rather than incidentally, (P)

I have no clue what the "とは" sentence ending particles are supposed to mean, though. I've seen both "to" and "ha/wa" used as sentence ending particles before, and I still have no clue as to what they add to the meaning.

By the way, what's your game called? :-)

[cacawate]

Cool, thanks a lot. The game is called Great Battle Cyber. It's a pretty cool game for the Famicom. Any other takers on these?

[cacawate]

Well, me and my buddy finished it up and the results are (If anyone gives a crap):

ここから　さきへ　すすませるわけには　いかないっ！ From here out, I won't let you go any further!

ここて゛　しんて゛もらおう。 And now, you shall die!

しんて゛いった　なかまたち　の　かたき！ This is for my dead buddies!

イサ゛イサ゛イサ゛！！　ト゛リャーッ！ Here I go! Aaaaagghh!!

ハッハッハッ！　いいサ゛マた゛な　いま　らくに　し てやる Hahaha! How pathetic. I will now ease your suffering.

しねェェェーッ！！ Diiiiieeeee!!

オーホホホホッ　この　わたしに　かてると　おもってるの ？ Hewhewhewheeew. You think you can beat me?

ここて゛　しんて゛おしまいっ！！ Now you're history!!

フッ　おろかな　わさ゛わさ゛しぬために　やってくる とは。 Ha! How foolish. You coming all this way just to die...

よく　ここまて゛きたな。　ます゛は　こてしらべ　と 　いこ You've finally come. First, let's start with a warm up.

うか！ Huh?!

いよいよ　ケリを　つける　ときか゛きたようた゛な。 It's time bring this fight to an end.

しねェェェィッ！ Diiiieeee!

よくそ゛きた！　おろかなるものよ！ You came! How foolish!

めさ゛めしわれの　はし゛めての　いけにえとなれ！！ From my awakening, you shall be my first living sacrafice.

ワーハハハハッ！　おまえの　ちからは　そんなものか！！ Ahahaha! That's the extent of your power?!

トローリと　あまいな！　こんと゛は　こっちのは゛んた゛！ You hit like a girl! Now it's my turn!

ク゛ォォー！　あと　すこして゛　かんせ゛んに　ふっかつ Uwooaaa! And I was so close to attaining

て゛きたものを．．．。 my perfect form...

Hope you enjoyed. And if anyone of you wanna add extra comments or anything, please feel free. See ya!

-Jeff