大きな問題とは・・・

[緑さん]

私の友（伸之さん）が「toneが問題」と言いまし た。「ＴＯＮＥ」とは「お祖父さんの方言や子供の方言 」とです。やさしい話と煩雑な話も「ＴＯＮＥ」とです 。小さい語彙も問題です。教えて下さい。

Incase my difficulty in japanese is showing:

"My friend 伸之 said that "tone" is my problem. "Tone" is where one speaks either as Grandpa or a little child. Simple and complicated speech is also "tone." Another problem is a small vocabulary. Please instruct me.

[JimmySeal]

So what do you want us to do about it?

[緑さん]

着想がいいで、私が下手に話すことを直して欲しいです。

For now, tips and/or ideas that anyone may have. Aside from that, i need to say things that i'll need corrected on.

[JimmySeal]

Try to find some easy comic books, and just read them. Don't worry about understanding all of it, or about looking words up. Just try and figure out what it means as you go along. Once you can do that, give young adult novels a try.

方言 in your first post should be 話し方 or しゃべり方. 方言 means dialect.

[緑さん]

しながら、ここに書きまして、それは勉強に手伝うと思います。どうもありがとう。