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Featured My local "Top 5 Tokyo Places" list - feedback request

Discussion in 'All Things Japanese' started by champlo0, Jan 13, 2018.

  1. champlo0

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    Hi everyone, I'm quite new to this forum but seems to be the only place I can get real, Japan-lover feedback on a recent blog post I just wrote up. I just came back from living in Japan and spent most of my time traveling, language learning, and working (in the bar/restaurant industry). Because one of my main goals was to travel, there was a lot of "cool Japan places" research, but ironically enough I never enjoyed the places travel guides listed. My best experiences came from places I learned from Japanese locals (Shimokitazawa, Koenji, Kagurazaka, Nonbei Yokocho, and Ebisu).

    My goal is to provide a more alternative, local point-of-view that can still be enjoyable for the average Western traveler. The blog post listed below is the direction I want to go with more articles. Personal experiences, hole-in-wall bars, Japanese language learning, etc. while still having a voice.

    Any advice will be greatly appreciated.

    My Top 5 Places in Tokyo (that do not include the Robot Restaurant) List
     
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  2. Lothor

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    #2 Lothor, Jan 13, 2018
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    I liked the blog - Despite being a long-term Tokyo resident, I hadn't heard of nonbei yokocho, and may even visit it if I can overcome my aversion to Shibuya!
    Certainly Koenji and Shimo Kitazawa are highly regarded as interesting parts of Tokyo by locals - I disagree that Koenji is a pain to get to from central Tokyo on JR though. There are loads of direct trains along the Chuo line from Tokyo and Shinjuku and it's only 7 mins from Shinjuku.
     
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    Yes, I too wondered why the OP said Koenji was hard to find. And I thought the picture of the STD clinic was an interesting choice for Koenji. Also, I wondered about the comment about the restaurants to in east Ebisu... But, nice blog and photos.
     
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  4. Mike Cash

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    I didn't read it and have no intention of even trying to read it as it exists now. I'll share a screenshot of what it looks like on my iPad and let you guess why.

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  5. champlo0

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    Hey, thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you also think Koenji and Shimokitazawa are also highly regarded by the locals!
     
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    Thanks for taking the time. The main Koenji photo was one I found on the #koenji hashtag on IG and my lack of kanji-reading skills didn't tell me that it was STD clinic, but good to know. :emoji_wink:
     
  7. champlo0

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    Hey there, thanks for your wonderfully constructive and helpful comment.
    I'll be sure to stare deeply at your screenshot of my blog and try to really, really guess why you 'don't have any intention of even trying to read it' and reflect on the poor, poor choices I've made.
     
  8. nice gaijin

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    My guess is your small font and grey-on-white color scheme is too low-contrast to be comfortable to read.
     
  9. Mike Cash

    Mike Cash 骨も命も皆此の土地に埋めよう

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    "Absolutely impossible to read" is more like it.

    Does it look like that on other platforms as well?
     
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    It doesn't look quite as bad on my desktop monitor as your screenshot, but I could tell what you were referring to. I dropped the text color value into a contrast checker and it fails accessibility standards even for large text, and the text on the page is pretty small.

    WebAIM: Color Contrast Checker
     
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  11. HanSolo

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    More please.
     

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