- 8 Apr 2004
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Dear native English speakers
Would you please check my sentences?
1 Will you give me one more chance, please?
2 The TFT project was started by Kogure Masahisa in 2007.
3 Through this donation, we can help the less fortunate living far away.
4 All these computers are connected to the Internet.
5 The company does not have enough money to complete the project.
6 It was fortunate that the weather was good.
7 Is two million yen enough to cover all the cost?
8 Steve Jobs, the founder of Apple Company, died from cancer.
9 We are responsible for all the customers who buy our products.
10 You don't need to read less important part.
11 Who is the founder of the project?
12 Will you connect this printer to the computer?
13 Twenty yen per meal is enough to cover the cost of one school lunch.
14 This small donation connects us to the schoolchildren in Africa.
Thanks in advance.
Hirashin
Would you please check my sentences?
1 Will you give me one more chance, please?
2 The TFT project was started by Kogure Masahisa in 2007.
3 Through this donation, we can help the less fortunate living far away.
4 All these computers are connected to the Internet.
5 The company does not have enough money to complete the project.
6 It was fortunate that the weather was good.
7 Is two million yen enough to cover all the cost?
8 Steve Jobs, the founder of Apple Company, died from cancer.
9 We are responsible for all the customers who buy our products.
10 You don't need to read less important part.
11 Who is the founder of the project?
12 Will you connect this printer to the computer?
13 Twenty yen per meal is enough to cover the cost of one school lunch.
14 This small donation connects us to the schoolchildren in Africa.
Thanks in advance.
Hirashin