Hello everyone,
I wrote some lyrics in japanese for a song and I just wanted to ask if you see big mistakes in my translations.
I put what I wanted to say in english also to better understand.
There are also some sentences which are mixing english and japanese so I just wanted to know if it wasn't too weird.
Thanks in advance for your help anyway !
Lyrics :
大丈夫そう?// Are you alright?
僕らから to this audio // From us to this audio
何が怖がっているの?// What are you afraid of?
話してよ even through a walkie-talkie // Talk to me even through a walkie-talkie
Girl いつもそばにいるよ // Girl I will always be there for you
なんて美しい町なんだろ // What a beautiful city
- All of that part below is more like a memory -
彼女はほほに涙を流しながら俺を見た // She looked at me with tears running down her cheeks
「出来ないわ!」// I can't do it! (by the girl in question)
人生楽しいことばかりじゃないんだよ // Life isn't all roses and sunshine
なんと辛い最後だろう // What a bitter end!
風がおだやかになった // The wind calmed down
あのドレスは彼女によく似合った // That dress really suited her
左の手首に蛇の入れ墨がついている // A tattoo of a snake on the left wrist
約束は破られるためにある // Promises are made to be broken
I wrote some lyrics in japanese for a song and I just wanted to ask if you see big mistakes in my translations.
I put what I wanted to say in english also to better understand.
There are also some sentences which are mixing english and japanese so I just wanted to know if it wasn't too weird.
Thanks in advance for your help anyway !
Lyrics :
大丈夫そう?// Are you alright?
僕らから to this audio // From us to this audio
何が怖がっているの?// What are you afraid of?
話してよ even through a walkie-talkie // Talk to me even through a walkie-talkie
Girl いつもそばにいるよ // Girl I will always be there for you
なんて美しい町なんだろ // What a beautiful city
- All of that part below is more like a memory -
彼女はほほに涙を流しながら俺を見た // She looked at me with tears running down her cheeks
「出来ないわ!」// I can't do it! (by the girl in question)
人生楽しいことばかりじゃないんだよ // Life isn't all roses and sunshine
なんと辛い最後だろう // What a bitter end!
風がおだやかになった // The wind calmed down
あのドレスは彼女によく似合った // That dress really suited her
左の手首に蛇の入れ墨がついている // A tattoo of a snake on the left wrist
約束は破られるためにある // Promises are made to be broken